Monday, September 3, 2012

B.A.R

Ounce upon a time.
There lived a king in a faraway land.
He had 1 daughter who was lovely.
They lived in a palace by the woods so know one knew where she was.
One day a handsome prince had a meeting with someone very very special but then he saw a huge tower.
He really needed a shelter a shelter since it was raining.
The magic animals saw the prince and warned rufunzel immdiatly.
And then rufunzel told her father.
And the king took care of everything.
The pretended to be his slave while Rufunzel was hiding.
For last the king showed the prince rufunzels room.
Rufunzel was till hiding but she remembered her long hair and put it out the window and hide somewhere safe and careful.
When the king finished his sentence the rain stopped.
The prince left but rufunzel was still outside.
the prince nearly saw rufunzel,but then he went by the bushes and saw her.
What are you doing in this berry bush.
Rufunzel didn't reply to the princes question.
But then the king saw the prince with the kings daughter and he was furious that the prince was with his daughter.
The prince saw the king mad and then cut of rufunzels hair.
The woods cleared away the magic animals were gone.
Rufunzels hair grew back fast but if her hair is cut off the kings woods never ever come back or the magic animals.
Rufunzel and the prince fell in love and lived happily ever after.
THE END.

3 comments:

  1. Great fairytale Angel I liked that Rafunzal and the Prince lived happily ever. One question I still have is why was the princesses name Rafunzal???
    Miss W

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  2. Hi Angel, I loved your story. You have worked really hard. Great work. Keep it up. xoxo. Mum.

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